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Persephone & Hades

He watched his opposite.
His other half.

(Goddess of the Earth who belonged in the Sun)

They truly were the more he thought about it.

(Dark sun kissed skin & dark firry red hair with leaf green eyes)
(His skin so pale & blonde hair and icy blue eyes)

She stares out with lightless eyes at the river of Styx wanting to cross it.
To go back up & stand under the warm sun where she belongs.
To talk to the flowers & watch them grow while birds sing in praise of her beauty.
Eating honeysuckles & pomegranates & drinking the finest wine.

He was selfish, but even so she would look at him love.

(Her fingers tangled in his hair when she kissed him)

She would try her best to smile at him and tell him she loved him.
Her words were like a sweet powdery lie that would melt on his tongue.
He was a selfish monster who devoured these lies in the dead of night when they were tangled together in silk and sweat.

(He always felt like he was melting when he held her at night)

She would sit next to him on the throne.
Ghostly beautiful as she watched the souls begging to go back to their loved ones.
White roses (the only flower that grows in Hades) woven into her short curly red hair.
Loyal silver wolves sit by her feet glaring at any soul who dared to close.
Silver gowns made of spider’s thread and a crown made of black thorns that only Hekate could make.
Cold flowers made of icy blue fire lick at her finger tips when she sends those souls away into their nightmares.
Her fingers threaded into his as she wilts away like the roses as he tries to water her with his love and devotion that are empty to her.

She was a butterfly; dancing in the golden light of Helios bright and filled with hope and curiosity that only belonged in dreams of children

He was a moth; walking in the starless night of Selene white and filled with visions of the horrifying past and wisdom that belonged in the nightmares of the dead.

Yet these two mingled and danced with one another.
The moth selfishly keeping the butterfly from the morning sun.
Making her dance in the sky under the watchful eyes of Selene.

The butterfly trying to feed the moth with colorful silk like powders.
Never daring to tear away from the starless night.

They truly were opposites, but one could not live without the other.
Or was that just a lie he was telling himself?
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Author's Comments

What is it with me and the underworld/Hell.

I'll probably end up doing a oneshot or something with these two, but I'm content with this poem at the moment. As I stated before I love mythology and Hades/Persephone are my favorite in the Greek Genre.
It actually took me awhile to picture Persephone (girls are usually easier for me), but I felt love this. Her hair isn't exactly short, but it goes to her neck...hmm, how do I describe her hair cut. It curls inward I guess is the best way I could describe it. I didn't want her to look too much like Lilith. Hades on the other hand was easy because I kind of imagined him like Nakago from Fushigi Yuugi. Here's a pic if you have no idea who he is: [link];pageOffset=15

(smexy, isn't he?)When I showed it to my dad he loved this poem.... okay please review! I would love it please.

Songs I listened to:

Sober by Kelly Clarkson
Alright by the Art of Chaos
Love, Reign o'er me by The Who
Can't take it in by Imogen Heap
Invincible by Crossfade

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:iconchaddarismyname:
(I would have commented sooner, but I was busy with science classes D8)

You're writing is so awesome. I love how you adapted Grecian mythology and I enjoyed reading the descriptive passages :)

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Chaddar says "Live life, bahala na."
:iconra-dragon:
Thanks, I love this myth so much. You can twist it and turn it into how ever you or I see fit. I like the who Persephone loving Hades better. But then again I'm a true romantic.

Actually the desriptive passages come out of me after reading alot of Franesca La Block.

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-"I thought I was crazy, Urameshi, but you'll take the prize. The hell was that? You don't make bombs go BOOM in your face!" -Jin from Yu Yu Hakusho
:iconsh0rtxpnay:
I love the romance of Greek mythology...I always wonder about the lives between two. Persephone and Hades...this was amazing. Please let me know if you write more Greek mythology adaptations!
:iconra-dragon:
Aww, thanks. (blushes) I love this mythology and I just like the bright side of things. You're in luck, I'm working on a novel right now on these too, but I'm working out some issues. I'll tell you more about it when I get done.

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-"I thought I was crazy, Urameshi, but you'll take the prize. The hell was that? You don't make bombs go BOOM in your face!" -Jin from Yu Yu Hakusho
:icona7xashley123:
BEAUTIFUL. ;~;

Haha, I loved the imagery and metaphors, amazing work.

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